Talk:Kwebbelkop/@comment-24.57.216.162-20151230192447

A few mistakes here..

>and then bacause of its broken parts.

bacause = because... innovative spelling there.

>Around this time he also got finally gratuated and started doing Youtube Full-Time.

Around this time he gratuated..<- but that is a sentence fragment and shouldn't start a new sentence.

Did he have trouble graduating? If he did use "finally" if not, don't.

Who wrote this.. a 5 year old or a non-native speaker?